Review for Crazy Kid Helping Crazy Kids

Crazy Kid Helping Crazy Kids

(#) KobraBlaze 2012-07-21 05:05:59 PM

This is a great story so far. After being introduced to Mikey, we already see how desperate Gerard is and how desperate Mikey is to get Frank to help his brother. The characters personas have been conveyed brilliantly. It is obvious Frank is that teenager that really couldn't care about others but one that doesn't know how easily his mind can be changed. Mikey is a determined, persuasive and caring brother that really loves his brother even though we see his scheming tricks to get Frank to help. The chapter has been written very well an I really enjoyed it. Can't wait for more! :)

Author's response

Thank you very much! I'm glad you saw how desperate the two brothers are through Mikey's actions with Frank. I think that Frank tries not to care, but in reality really does and just has to be persuaded of it. Mikey really does love his brother, which is why he was so willing to use those tricks to get Frank to want to help.

Thanks for reviewing! :D

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