I can't wait for the next chapter! I really love the plot, it's so clever and I can't believe that no one has thought of it before (that's a compliment) and oh my god. It's a good sign that I'm just rambling and not making any sense because the story's so good :D The way you describe the feelings and emotions and stuff, that's mighty powerful stuff. I certainly couldn't do it, but then again I'm not really that good anyway XD PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE REALLY SOON OTHERWISE I MIGHT DIE OR SOMETHING
Author's response
I'm writing the next chapter now, so it should either be up tomorrow or by Tuesday at the very latest.
Thank you very much; it's a huge relief to know that you think the plot's alright! I was worried that this was a little boring, especially towards the end, so it's really nice to know that you thought the description worked alright and wasn't just really dull.
Thanks for such a lovely review and I'll try my best to update ASAP! :D