Review for They gave us 2 shots to the back of the head

They gave us 2 shots to the back of the head

(#) FrankAIero 2012-07-27 03:44:41 PM

Okay, it cut off the last part of the review where I said I did really love this chapter regardless of the mistakes. This chapter was very adorable. But the story as a whole is very rushed. But I think this is your best chapter yet and you are slowly improving.

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