Review for "Be My Detonator."

"Be My Detonator."

(#) ChasingPavementsxoxo 2012-07-29

I liked the rewritten version, but I'm not sure if I liked this or the first version better. This version is really good though c:


Author's response

Thanks (: Really? The first version of chapter one was really shitty in my opinion- bad grammar, layout and just sloppily written :L Thanks for reviewing!