Review for To The End (With Me Driving, It Sure As Hell Will Be)

To The End (With Me Driving, It Sure As Hell Will Be)

(#) SerenityInSilence 2012-08-01

Is this the story you were thinking about? I like it a lot. There was one Thing I was wondering about though, the sentence "Frank took one look at the Mikey, the two conflicting routes, and silently broke down, because really, if he couldn’t even tell left from right, he had no hope left whatsoever." I think you might've put an extra "the" there. Otherwise, this is great and you should totally continue. And I love TTETI :)

Author's response

Yes, it is, and thank you (: Ahh, thanks for pointing that out- it was a stupid typo... I'll go fix it now. Thanks so much for reviewing :D