Review for I Shouldnt Love You

I Shouldnt Love You

(#) CatscanFlyy 2012-08-03 09:04:53 AM

Oh my god baby Frankie :O oh he is so small noooo

honestly I should have expected something like that after reading the description

I'm both disgusted and intreagued so I'll be watching to see just where you take this. The only thing I would suggest is more paragraph breaks, especially around the dialog. Other than that; awesome.

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Thanks ;P

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