Good job! :D I loved this. And seriously, wow. You write like the wind. It took you less than a month to write a story that would've taken me like six months. Teach me the your secrets, sensei.
But dang, Rory's back? Off with his head!
I write like the wind, I eat like a pig and I sleep like a log. All in a day's work ;) Haha. I don't have secrets. You should ask my fingers. They do all the work. (¬‿¬) Hehe. That sounded like a sexual innuendo! XD Haha. Off with his head fo' sho' XD xx