FicWad

I don't know... I think maybe its too simplistic and at the same time not. Like its good don't get me wrong. Its has a great feel and a very nice tone. I just think you may be stating the obvious a little. I think it was implied in the movie that he didn't like what he was doing and so on... I think it was a really good set up, and maybe I'm just being a pain and expecting too much from a short fic, but it seems just to kind of fizzle out. If that make any sense...