Review for Cold Love
I did notice a few errors like these:
- "Retasu walked a bit faster to *walked* with"
- "She's not gonna like waking up with *wired* people around her"
But despite the tiny errors, the story has been a great read so far! [I have to admit: I was originally scared off because of the many spelling errors in your story's discription. ^^;; hehe] I hope you'll continue soon! =D I'm excited to find out what's going to happen next.
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