Review for Cold Love

Cold Love

(#) Pange 2006-03-08 08:49:55 PM

Ah, what a fun story so far! I'm really interested in what's happening with the Mew Mews, especially with the Lettuce X Ryou undertones. [I love that coupling, yay! ^_^]

I did notice a few errors like these:

- "Retasu walked a bit faster to *walked* with"
- "She's not gonna like waking up with *wired* people around her"

But despite the tiny errors, the story has been a great read so far! [I have to admit: I was originally scared off because of the many spelling errors in your story's discription. ^^;; hehe] I hope you'll continue soon! =D I'm excited to find out what's going to happen next.

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