This is just so good, honey. Your writing style and the little world you've created with this story I think is really unique. It might be a relatively common storyline (the high school frerard part), but you've very much made it your own, and I find the characters intriguing- you don't give too much or too little about them away, so I'm kept hooked and wanting more.
Oh, and Frank's comebacks? So awesome.
Can't wait to read more!
I know that the high school thing is pretty well-used, but I do try! Thank you so much xx