I love this story, but just as a helpful hint, you really should work on your grammar and spelling :P e.g. "low class pheasant" - a pheasant is a bird, a peasant is lower class. Please don't take this badly, I'm just trying to help :) Great storyline though! Keep at it! x
Author's response
Shit sorry stupid spell check. God do I feel stupid. Thanks for pointing it out.
XOXodakota