Review for Our Lips Touch
Our Lips Touch
(#) DaniAtaDisco 2012-09-03 04:08:59 PM
3 things.
1: "maybe another planet and change my name to Fun Ghoul and wear a shirt with yellow long sleeve and a very dark green dirty vest over the top and have a pair of kick ass sunglasses. I could create a new life based on lies and I’ll rebel against authority, eat food out of a can and try to change the world while fighting to stay alive and battle against the bad guys in an epic laser gun fight. There would be muscle cars and art would be the weapon. I’ll carry an awesome looking green ray gun on me at all times and if someone decides to mention my past life I’d just shoot them." totally got it. I found it so funny I fell outta my chair.
2) ... haha!!!!!YOU FINALLY UPDATED!!! can't wait for the next chapter (as soon as you described the new kid I said, 'yeah thats totally Bob'
then he said 'I'm Bob')
3) sdjkhfiusdf cksdjhy fusdhfjksdhbfuihweyifresfreth TOTALLY IN LOVE WITH YOU (take it the creepy way. creepy = good) I LOVE THIS STORY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
1: "maybe another planet and change my name to Fun Ghoul and wear a shirt with yellow long sleeve and a very dark green dirty vest over the top and have a pair of kick ass sunglasses. I could create a new life based on lies and I’ll rebel against authority, eat food out of a can and try to change the world while fighting to stay alive and battle against the bad guys in an epic laser gun fight. There would be muscle cars and art would be the weapon. I’ll carry an awesome looking green ray gun on me at all times and if someone decides to mention my past life I’d just shoot them." totally got it. I found it so funny I fell outta my chair.
2) ... haha!!!!!YOU FINALLY UPDATED!!! can't wait for the next chapter (as soon as you described the new kid I said, 'yeah thats totally Bob'
then he said 'I'm Bob')
3) sdjkhfiusdf cksdjhy fusdhfjksdhbfuihweyifresfreth TOTALLY IN LOVE WITH YOU (take it the creepy way. creepy = good) I LOVE THIS STORY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's response
1) WOW did you really? Ha that's so funny...wish i was there!
2) Yeah I Updated....YAY, I thought Bob would be good in this story.
3)YAY I'M LOVED!!!! I LIKE CREEPY ;D. Fuck it, I don't know why but i love you too!
thank you for the comment XD.
2) Yeah I Updated....YAY, I thought Bob would be good in this story.
3)YAY I'M LOVED!!!! I LIKE CREEPY ;D. Fuck it, I don't know why but i love you too!
thank you for the comment XD.
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