Review for A Pause For Reflection.
A Pause For Reflection.
(#) Raxhi98 2012-09-30 11:13:57 PM
Hey Brea, it's Christall. From Facebook. I'm not sure if you remember me, heh, but I just had to read this, and um ok wow.
-wails infinitely- I DID NOT SIGN UP FOR THESE FEELS. TAKE THEM AWAY. I-UGH-GUH-HOW TO WORDS!?
On a slightly more articulate note, I'm not going to lie to you and say this is perfect- it's not. It has spelling errors and typos and grammatical mistakes but literally no story is void of any of these flaws. This.. this is going to go somewhere. I know it's not your first fic, and it certainly doesn't feel like it. There's realism, deflatable characters, realistic dialogue, and fucking /symbolism/.
I fucking love symbolism I mean shit.
I'm looking forward to the rest of this. favourites
-wails infinitely- I DID NOT SIGN UP FOR THESE FEELS. TAKE THEM AWAY. I-UGH-GUH-HOW TO WORDS!?
On a slightly more articulate note, I'm not going to lie to you and say this is perfect- it's not. It has spelling errors and typos and grammatical mistakes but literally no story is void of any of these flaws. This.. this is going to go somewhere. I know it's not your first fic, and it certainly doesn't feel like it. There's realism, deflatable characters, realistic dialogue, and fucking /symbolism/.
I fucking love symbolism I mean shit.
I'm looking forward to the rest of this. favourites
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I love you ._.
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