Review for I'm Purity Hit Me Again

I'm Purity Hit Me Again

(#) valeria941012 2012-10-08 11:13:32 PM

You're hungry, but I'm starving
He cuts you down from the tree
He keeps you in a box by the bed
Alive, but just barely
He said, "I'm your lover, I'm your friend"
I'm pure and he hits me again
Now I know where did you get the tittle, which is great btw. When I read your response to the first comment I was like: no way in hell I'm going to let her give up with this story, so it's great you decided to continue. Update soon :)

Author's response

Lol, when I read the first line of your comment I was like, "What is this person quoting?" Then I read the next few lines and I was like, "Oh my God! This is so awesome and sweet!" I'm actually using a lot of Hole songs for chapter titles because I just feel if Erin was to be a singer she would be singing those lyrics. sigh God, Courtney Love can pen a song perfectly. And thanks so much. I just finished the second chapter, but it's still currently in the editing process because I'm trying to get a more background thing for Erin. But don't worry, the next few chapters won't disappoint ;) 
P.S. I always seem to rant when I get these comments. That shows you gave a great one :D

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