Since you were so kind to review my story, I thought I'd return the favor. I read this whole thing during Verbal Communications and my lunch break and I may say: O-face, much? I'm a drama whore and I was quite satisfied. Amazing. You have quite a way with words, so don't worry about having to step up your game. :)
don't you hate how you can't edit your reviews? i know i do. :) it's makes me look more hip when you accidentally submit a review twice.