O.o
Whoaaa.
Are you sure you need practice?
:3
I would say that was written realistically but I wouldn't know. :3 but as far as I could tell, it was awesome.
Some of it was really funny, and I liked it.
I will say that for me, I prefer no smut... I find it a good sign when an author can kind of just imply a sex scene really well.
Okay, but wait, is Rian gonna he pregnant? DID GERARD FORGET??? THEY SHOULD HAVE USED CONDOMS MIKEY JUST TAKE A BREAK FOR A WHILE YOU LITTLE SEX MONSTER
THEY SHOULD HAVE ABSTAINED FROM SEX
Sorry, I 'm all about abstinence ever since Ryan the Pushy Virgin. (In atomickilljoy's stories, she likes to write Ryan Ross as a pushy virgin who shoves his abstinence down people's throats... that sentence doesn't make sense and is ironic at the same time.)
Anyway, so glad you updated! Update soon!
Author's response
Haha I've only ever written one other full out sex scene. X.x Other than that I just always imply it because I'm just not that great at writing smut, and I USUALLY don't find it necessary. In this case it kind of is, and I wanted to write the reactions they had to each other. Sometimes that is good to relay, especially during sex when emotions are high. Plus, I've been wanting to try it out a little- and write some smut. It's just an attempt of sorts, at something... more risque?
Haha, thank you.
;) That's what Gerard is worried about, lol and part of why I wrote the entire scene- just to kind of explain how in to it they are when the act is forgotten about.
Haha and I did push it off on poor Mikey!
Really? Haha, I want to read some of that! That's funny. I didn't really write Gerard to be all too intent upon abstaining though he did kind of try.
Thanks for the review! Glad you kind of/sort of enjoyed!