Oh my God. I think I just found a piece of writing on this site by someone with an appreciation for sentence-structure. Praise be to Jesus.
Intriguing start, love that last line too. Onwards!
I try my best to be an English professor with writing, which I can now see that I'm doing fairly well at; thank you.
I want to make this up to 40 chapters, and so the story shall continue. \o/
Btw the first and last lines are from a Panic! At The Disco song, though I forget which one at the current moment.