"America had just been getting shittier and shittier as democrats continued to win elections." Okay...
Regardless of political opinion this is seriously bloody good and I'm pretty mad at myself for not discovering you earlier, having just found out that this is, in fact, your last fic. Why?? Why do I always find the good authors when it's already too late??
Anyways, please continue this because it is well-written, intelligent and I'm confused in a good way which makes me want to read on. Also The Matrix kicks hairy balls.
I'd like to point out that I am indeed entirely for democrats, and I think Obama is an incredible person who has very appealing views on many subjects. Because of him, my sister will have a chance to be married to a person of her choice; she can have an abortion if she is raped, her salary will be more of a pay, she'll have a better chance overall
The only reason I said that was because Obama has put America into a significant amount of debt and unemployment, and money has decreased its worth (though that's not entirely his fault).
Just to clear that up. :)
Thank you very much, I haven't gotten very detailed reviews for awhile now, and I see that you've been looking at my other posts, which is also nice. Gives me the confidence to continue writing, you know?
It's my last fanfiction because I want to give this account to my sister that I spoke of earlier. That, and along with the fact that I don't plan on being around here much longer because I'd like to enter into a rehabilitation center for a few reasons.
I have a really good feeling about this story, and it seems that you do too. I'll continue trying my best to make chapters long and interesting (as well as trying to broaden my vocabulary).
You don't know how much it means to me to have an avid reader in a time of hardship. Thank you.