Review for A New Beginning

A New Beginning

(#) Link2000_2001 2012-10-27 08:53:03 AM

Not a bad beginning only thing I could fault you on is that mrs figg probably wouldn't know most of the stuff she said in her letter to dudley. You might want to find a different character to write the letter. You could have mrs figg contact the other perdon and have him/her write it.

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She does say sge had to check some things. It is assumed in HP canon that she must have had some way to speak to Dumbledore re Harry; and although never mentioned in my story I assume the information came that way.
Hope this helps. Please ontinue to read and hopefully enjoy as i post

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