You know I dig "Big Dreams..." but seriously, girl, you´ve really improved. That´s a kick-ass chapter. The "Hey Chris!" comment on the phone made me chuckle. Yes, it is a classic. You´ve got some great conversation going on here, paired with cute Patrick moments and the Andy-starts-a-new-life... ah, mission. I´m loving it. You´re getting my next to last rating point. :)
Author's response
thanks! yeah... big dreams was my first and i got really lazy when i was writing it. i'm trying to get better! i might update on that one sometime in the future, but who knows! thanks for the review, like always!