Review for After the Battle
After the Battle
(#) Chris7100 2012-12-08 10:38:29 PM
Magic, it's clear that English isn't your first language. You actually have an interesting story here, but it's virtually impossible to read because of the language issues. Get yourself a solid Beta to scrub your grammar and diction and keep writing. Best of luck!
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