Review for Channel Hopping
(#) pixied_secrets 2006-11-12 12:16:37 PM
no complaints...this whole chapter is very well written. going through pete's emotions as he tries to find a reason as to why he's imprisoned, and who it could be, helps the reader to question the reasons as well, and rule out other possible suspects.
the cliffhanger that you ended the chapter on is pure genius...the kind of thing that makes this story addictive.
oh, and your use of "turgid" made me feel like a proud parent. ha
*Frerard One Shot* Gerard finds it hard to keep his hands off of Frank.
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