Review for Channel Hopping
(#) pixied_secrets 2006-11-12 12:16:37 PM
no complaints...this whole chapter is very well written. going through pete's emotions as he tries to find a reason as to why he's imprisoned, and who it could be, helps the reader to question the reasons as well, and rule out other possible suspects.
the cliffhanger that you ended the chapter on is pure genius...the kind of thing that makes this story addictive.
oh, and your use of "turgid" made me feel like a proud parent. ha
If you like my work, you may want to check this out. Or you might not. Look, I don't know...
- Authors: 638605
- Stories: 40446
Brendon/O.C. Brendon and Amy cross paths out of sheer luck, will Amy fall hard for the panic! singer...
Big Wild Goose Pagoda,many highlighted squares and gardens
In: Ai Yori Aoshi
An OC-centric series. It's not always what you know, and as it turns out, it's not always who you kn...
just kinda winging this one but once I'm done I'll bang out a summary lol
Get off my account Max