I really liked your story. It's very good.
I also wanted to ask if you're aware this story is being posted at Fanfiction.net with the name "Shinying Silver" in an account that is known by posting plagiarised stories.
Please reply here or contact me at Fanfiction.net (Same usermane). Or at my email izraill255 @ gmail .com (I'm not sure if it will show, so I put spaces)
See you around.