Review for Channel Hopping
(#) pixied_secrets 2006-11-14 03:49:55 PM
the suspense of the situation is so abundant. the way it the story flows slowly helps develop a descriptive ambiance and it builds the anticipation.
showing pete as he slowly loses his mind by letting his paranoia get the best of him leaves us wondering what his next option is. i'm actually finding myself trying to piece the information together and wonder what the next step is. now there is no TV to communicate with him, so whoever abducted him has to reveal their identity.
gah. i'm on the edge of my seat. and you aren’t going to update for like, three days just to keep me here. you are a sick fuck. but i love you for it.
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I set this when Brendon was in highschool. He meets new girl Trisha, but will she fall for the nerd ...
One more day to go, and I'll be doing this, so ask away NOW! :D
Said in the nicest way possible (it's a joke guys, not a dick. So don't take it so hard)
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