Review for 12:18.

12:18.

(#) OhmyGee 2013-01-19 06:53:02 PM

You really know how to write

I still can't believe she ...anyone could do this.

Maybe she didn't swallow the pills. If she did, then I know she must be feeling blissful by now. My friend who had an NDE tried many times to let go

I never even knew Anna, but, damn...

I don't know whether to call her brave for doing something I don't know how to do, or to call her a coward (respectivly) because she was able to go that easily.

I really do wish I was able to get to know her. I just... she is probably the fourth person that I knew who left to this.

Thank you for taking the time to write your poetry.

Lets just hope.

Author's response

Well, I don't know about that...I think you're far better.

I hope wherever she is, she is feeling happy. Is your friend alright now?

I didn't know her either. I wish I could've, though.

I'm not sure...a brave coward doesn't seem like it would suite her. Maybe she was just fucking lost.

I...god.

Thanks...I just had to do something.

I hope she sees this if she hasn't gone through with it yet.

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