Review for Triangle Complex

Triangle Complex

(#) DrT 2006-11-16

"Since 845, a large house stood on this site, when a religious centre for Cistercian monks was built."

Neat trick since the Order formed in 1098. We won't go into the misuse of titles. Such little things disrupt the flow of a story line.

"T"

Author's response

Ok, ok. Thanks for pointing the things out for me. I am looking for a better beta, who is able to work fast enough.
That sentence looked great to me.

I take your review and use it to make the stories better, and less irritating for those who see those things.

Thanks for the review.

Wim