Review for Challenge
Challenge
(#) shadowvt125 2013-02-14 08:35:20 AM
Ah, so glad you’re back! First: I’m enjoying this immensely!
I love your tale from the root on.
The setting, the cast (…Nikki, Blackie, Izzy …even Chris has his appearance ) your characterizations (for one Izzy isn’t just the plain guy, pinning over whomever*, your Nikki* and even your Slash), the twists and turns: You know how to pull the strings for sure!
Please keep it up – I’ll stay tuned!
*You know your G n’R, don’t you?
** Sigh… evil motherfucker on one hand, decadent and rotten to the core… on the other hand yet so tender and fragile, just a lovable misfit.
* he’s pinning anyway… but how! And the dumpster thing….
I love your tale from the root on.
The setting, the cast (…Nikki, Blackie, Izzy …even Chris has his appearance ) your characterizations (for one Izzy isn’t just the plain guy, pinning over whomever*, your Nikki* and even your Slash), the twists and turns: You know how to pull the strings for sure!
Please keep it up – I’ll stay tuned!
*You know your G n’R, don’t you?
** Sigh… evil motherfucker on one hand, decadent and rotten to the core… on the other hand yet so tender and fragile, just a lovable misfit.
* he’s pinning anyway… but how! And the dumpster thing….
Author's response
Back in Black! lol. But seriously your review seriously made my entire week so much better. And glad you liked Chris as well as all my characterizations. Chris worked so well in the plot, you know? :)
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