this was...
oh my god I cant even explain it. It made me feel so weird, I got serious chills up my spine and the hairs on the back of my neck stood up and aw man!! It was just too intense for words dude!
Im so happy i read this and when he was talking about her touching him I was just so sucked into it I didnt even realize my friend tasha was talking to me!
I generally feel like this should be made int a movie because it was written so well :)
Thanks for writing this and I really hope you update soon, I love this story so much!
T xoxo