Review for Channel Hopping
(#) pixied_secrets 2006-11-19 02:32:08 PM
1.) that he can still see his reflection. it causes confusion in him and makes him question things. his denial of the situation comes through vividly with that.
2.) the way you chose to show the readers that he really is dead: cutting himself.
3.)also the way he realizes he doesn't have normal wants, like food, clothing or the want to relieve himself. although he doesn't really put two and two together.
4.) at the end, describing how he died. his mom finding him…now, did that show up on the TV? Did he watch that?
i'm just kind of wondering where it can go from here and how he finds out/realizes he is really dead. what happens then?
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