Review for Bye
Your ideas were nothing special. But everyone writes terrible things every now and again.
Why'm I encouraging you?
You've got potential.
You're gonna be great one day. Who're you writing for, exactly? Yourself? Or everyone else on here? Writing professionally doesn't mean you need other people's approval, y'know.
And who said anything about changing your style? Sure, it ain't drop-dead all-out sicktastic, but your style's fine. You just need some good ideas. Easier said than done, neh?
I'm leaving myself the choice to either just stop writing or wait until after my exams and start writing again in the summer. Hopefully by then I can focus on getting better at it but until then it's all school for me.