Videl seems like a very flawed character. If I met her in real life, I'm not sure if I could be friends with her. Then again, I probably would, since I don't have many friends, if she'd have me. AHHH PATRICK! You balding awkward bundle of pure adorkableness. Hey and Andy! More people! The way you portray conversations in between Videl and these people kinda feels stunted in some ways, but it's overall still good. Keep writing, man, this is going somewhere awesome. I can see it.
-S