Review for Screwed up love life

Screwed up love life

(#) jennieman 2006-11-23

okay that, was awesome. lol. ooo burn on jay. and i think you could easily make this an A/T, you're building them up quite nicely and at a good pace. maybe add in some more conflict with atlanta, some more jay hating, it's all good. and ya, i decided to stick around and review more, rather than writing. so write another chapter so i can review that too lol. but seriously, really looking forward to it, the tension in the story is so palpable and so well written, i can't wait. patiently biting my nails in anticipation till then m'dear.