Review for Thou Shalt Not Kill

Thou Shalt Not Kill

(#) LuckyLadybug 2006-11-24

Wow. That was ... wow.

At first I thought it was Gin talking, perhaps musing over his past, but I soon realized it was Shinichi. This is short, but I don't think it needs to be any different. The picture you've painted is intriguing. Gin got what he "wanted", apparently, to make Shinichi hate ... or perhaps he wanted and got a release. I can't imagine Gin being someone who's very satisfied about life, particularly his own. Yet, he's not the type who would ever kill himself. He stubbornly presses on, no matter what. XD

I'm about to post a story I did about Gin a while back and posted on I'd be honored if you'd review. :)