Review for Broken Promises

Broken Promises

(#) ArsenicAutumn 2013-08-23 02:30:17 PM

You accurately described a very broken person (IMO). My heart damn near wrenched out of my chest when I saw the letter from Frank to Gerard. When someone is that unstable, a tendency to emotionally depend on someone else is (in many cases) a really bad thing when that other person can't give them the type of "attention" they need.

I love the way this was done in first person, it made it seem that much more real.

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