This. Is. Fabulous. So many thoughts. I'm speechless. Love it. So so so so so so so much. Just saying.
no, no, you aren't just saying! thank you so much. i've always wanted to be fabulous (or at least fabulous by association of work).
it's really just playing around with rhyming words, syllables, and rhythmic patterns. the piece as a whole kinda falls in there afterwards, when you tweak it around. so this little ol' thing was more or less a chance game, if you know what i mean.