Review for Harry Potter and the Shadow's Child

Harry Potter and the Shadow's Child

(#) Fuzzball 2006-11-26 10:29:48 PM

You might want to review your story for some minor errors such as tenses. This is a good start though. For example in your last chapter about Rosaline. You have her being in the womb and at the same time being born all in the same paragraph.

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