Review for Dudley Dursley Saves the World

Dudley Dursley Saves the World

(#) Ithilwen 2006-03-27

You overuse the word "freak" a bit. It doesn't quite come off as a comment on Dudley's limited vocabulary.

Maybe this would be cooler if you gave us a look at what's going on in Mr. Dudley's piggy little brain. Is he still afraid of magic? Is Harry still a skinny loser to his mind?