In the immortal words of Jake M. ... Gah... Oh my goodness how on earth did you turn a one shot reunion meeting with Jodie into something reminiscent of Nemo Blank? As always tightly written and cohesive! my only wish is a little more flesh to the in between times but that is more a wish to see more of your writing than a need to link scenes together. I look forward to more chapters in the story. You do realize that with some editint to remove the fan fiction aspects you have the start of what I consider a sell-able novel. Thank you again for entertaining me.
Brian
Author's response
Thanks for the kind words! I hope you enjoy the rest of the story