Review for Other drabbles
"Beasts" doesn't really resolve. It plays on some sort of connection between Lucius and snakes, which hasn't really been nailed down.
The last one is quite unsupported.
Author\'s Response: But did Imperio deflect Harry's spell or Voldemort's? I could tell you, but the drabble would have to change its name./The last one is quite unsupported./Ah, the perils of a fic challenge ...
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