Review for This Isn't What You Wanted.

This Isn't What You Wanted.

(#) pixied_secrets 2006-11-29

yes, i am kicking myself for not finishing what i started with this one.

i remember reading this and being like "whoa. very impressive", but my mind is far from linear and we both know how hard it is to keep up with FicWad.

anyway, enough of the excuses...

you put a lot of information into this one chapter…

being that it gave the whole history of their relationship together. describing her as "black and white" but also describing pete as having "shown her the gray"...i love it.

and then describing their relationship from Patricks point of view, and his amount of jealousy/admiration for the couple was pretty amazing.

so, i'm going to continue on this adventure. thanks for taking my mind off of life for a while...

Author's response

Thanks for the faith. Needed it. Miss you?