Great Fic Raven. I liked the whole fic completely. The ending was different, and I liked that. ^^
I have to say this about PARCD though, he/she can't make us change the way we write. If he/she has a problem about it, they can go suck a lemon.
Great job again Raven. Your a master at this. ^___^
Thanks Kitten! You're getting better at this reviewing thing lol. -hugs- You're awesome girl!