Review for Loves Punishment

Loves Punishment

(#) whatkatydid 2006-12-05

The end line of your chapters are always so amazing
It was going to be a good night and if he played his cards right a great life. Amen to that.

I'm totally curious, first there's Arissa in chapter 1&2 and now this Arissa.....ponders This is making way for a very interesting story.

I cannot wait to read more.

Author's response

I think ending sentences are suppose to make you want to never stop reading! I love coming up with the end of a chappie! Glad you all didn't think they were "Fillers".