Review for Green

Green

(#) sabeybaby 2006-04-12 07:48:34 PM

That was cute.. in a drunken upset, share-the-woe kind of way. I'm not very good at giving opinion on stories unless things are really noticeable, but it'd probably help you a bit if you seperated your paragraphs by another space.

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