Review for The Suicide Note
Overall, I'd say that there's nothing particularly wrong with this poem, but it doesn't do anything new either. Think of it this way. Every few years, there's a new Cinderella movie - "Ever After," that TV version with Brandy and Burnadette Peters, "Ella Enchanted" (the movie was bad but the book was great). Why do they bother telling the same story? Answer: Because each retelling tries something a little different. "Ever After" gave us a completely magic-free version. "Ella" put Cinderella under a curse.
Now you're writing a poem about suicide. What can you do with it? What do other people do in suicide poems that you don't like? What do you wish people could express? What do you think people are afraid of hearing?
and yes some my poems are considered to be emo.
Dumbledore told Harry in HPSS what he saw in the Mirror of Erised. Why has no one ever gotten him w...
In: Harry Potter
- Authors: 268411
- Stories: 39843
It all begins outside a nightclub...
In: Guns n' Roses
Jared made a huge mistake: he fell in love.
Vampire Frerard; Frank Iero was looking for a normal life and he got the complete opposite. After...
FIR, NOT MCR! Ronnie Radke tries to have 'swag', only to make an ass out of himself.
After the Ponds, The Doctor decides to "retire" and 16 years later, here we are with him and his 16 ...
In: Doctor Who