It was good, but it was confusing. Who the heck is Jayden? And what's with the phone call? What'd that have to do with the story? I'm confused.
Author's response
My most sincere apologies. First of all, to know who Jayden is, you must read my other current story, Twins, which you can find either on my profile or the second page. Second of all, the phone call is just a little something i like to share with others. it did truly happen to me. i think starting off a chapter/story with something non realated can sometimes get the reader in some kind of mood. this phone call conversation prabobaly made some of you be more aware of idiotic callers who calls at 3 in the morning.