Aww, that was cute! I luff Brendon, and even though he took your hoodie...you have to admit he did look good in it. Haha, I saw that show, They were at Starland for me.
Cute story, hope you continue it...just a little constructive critisism (If I even spelled that right) Try putting all your charactures actions in past tense, like he opened the door not he opens the door. I dunno, it just sounds better. But im no story writer.
Much luff, good luck on continuing your story.