Review for Take Back This Goodbye

Take Back This Goodbye

(#) katherine 2007-01-02 12:20:05 AM

In Learning to Trust i was disapointed how Frankie's character acted with the miscarriage and all, and when my sister found the sequel of this novel i was like yes!! he might be there for her this time around. when i got to the last chapter and found out it was all her hallucinations the story became dumb to me. Her halluciantions should of been true and in the end Frankie should of died and Mina should have been put into a mental institution or something like that, but other than that i like the story. keep it up.

Author's response

Thanks for reading!

There was a voting on who Mina should have ended up with which took place after chapter 002 (KKPC) and was hosted on another site. The voting was in Frankie's favor and I decided that this, among at most six alternate endings, was the best ending to suit the results. The mental/death thing was one of the alternate endings I had written if there was a tie between Frank and Pete--are you psychic?

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