Review for Crippled

Crippled

(#) Ithilwen 2006-04-25

This make a nice point, but it needs more editing.

"It's just that me and my team has more than others," for example, should be, "It's just that my team and I have more than others."

This is from House's perspective, right? His speech is kind of colloquial, but mostly he uses correct American English.

Author's response

Thank you.