Review for Love Will Tear Us Apart

Love Will Tear Us Apart

(#) 44caliber 2007-01-13

your story is really good, but there is some confusion over the POV at times, and the repetiton is a little odd. your timeline is a bit blurry too... but you have a really good plot, and exceptional writing skills. radtacular :)

Author's response

thanks for the help! glad you like it! ^^