Review for Alchemic Wizard
Alchemic Wizard
(#) Yuna_141 2007-01-15 12:24:15 AM
Hey, really liking the story so far :)
There's a few problems with misspellings - e.g. "throw" should be "through" and "roll model" should be "role model" (though a bread roll with a cowlick and Ed's angry face pops into mind far too readily), but nothing major enough to really interfere with the story.
Keep going!
There's a few problems with misspellings - e.g. "throw" should be "through" and "roll model" should be "role model" (though a bread roll with a cowlick and Ed's angry face pops into mind far too readily), but nothing major enough to really interfere with the story.
Keep going!
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